Revisions: Film 2 script

Chloe and I felt like our film didn't really hit its mark when we showed it to our classes, so we revised it and completely changed it. Some people said that it was really slow in the forest scenes and the plot line had a huge gap in it. Soon the new script, the audience will actually be seeing the monster and see it capture and "eat" its prey.

MISSING

ACT 1

JAXON IS WALKING DOWN THE DRIVEWAY WHEN HE SEES A “PERSON” STANDING IN THE MIDDLE OF THE RAVINE. HE WANDERS DOWN TO INVESTIGATE. WHEN HE MAKES HIS WAY DOWN, HE MEETS THIS DEMONIC BEING AND STARTS TO INCH TOWARDS IT. HIS MOTHER STOPS HIM. 

JAXON

(HEARS A FLURRY OF WHISPERS BECKONING HIM TO COME CLOSER)

MOTHER

“JAXON! WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU DOING?”

(PICKS UP JAXON)

“YOU KNOW YOU’RE NOT SUPPOSED TO WANDER OFF!” 

(LOOKS BACK TO WHERE JAXON WAS STANDING AND SEES A BUSH RUSTLE)

ACT 2

(PARENTS TALKING IN THE BACKGROUND WITH NEIGHBORS ABOUT A RANDOM TOPIC)

JAXON SEES THE BEING NEAR THE PLAY-GYM, BECKONING HIM, HE MAKES HIS WAY TO THE SPOT. HE HEARS THE WHISPERS AGAIN. WHEN HE GETS TO THE PLAY-GYM THE BEING IS GONE, BUT HE HEARS THE WHISPERING COMING FROM THE ORIGINAL SPOT WHERE HE FOUND IT. THE BEING IS FURTHER DOWN THE RAVINE, BECKONING HIM TO FOLLOW. HE DOES, THUS LEADING HIM TO A FOREST.

ACT 3

JAXON CLIMBS OUT OF THE REVINE AND WANDERS INTO THE FOREST. HE CATCHES GLIMPSES OF THE BEING AND FOLLOWS IT DEEPER INTO THE BRUSH. HE LOOSES IT. 

JAXON

“WHERE DID YOU GO?”

JAXON LOOKS AROUND TO TRY TO FIND IT, BUT HE DOESN'T KNOW THAT  IT IS ALREADY WATCHING HIM. THE BEING THEN POUNCES ONTO ITS “PREY” (JAXON) AND EATS HIM. 

ACT 4

(MUFFLED CHATTER IN THE HALLWAY OF A HIGH SCHOOL)

A HIGH SCHOOL GIRL IS PUTTING UP A MISSING PERSON SIGN OF JAXON ON THE SCHOOL ANNOUNCEMENTS BOARD. WHEN A LARGER ANGLE IS SHOWN, THE BOARD IS FILLED WITH MISSING PEOPLE POSTERS, AND THE GIRL PUTTING UP THE POSTERS IS STANDING WITH TRIUMPH. THE GIRL TURNS AROUND, SLOWLY, THE AUDIENCE SEES HER BLACK, DEMONIC AND SOULLESS EYES.